Tuesday 12 May 2015

WALT write a narrative based on a video prompt

Monkey Symphony

I have had a horrible life because 20 years ago I got taken away from my brother, because we didn't play how Lob wanted us to. Lob's my grandmothers name.

My name is John.  I am a professional piano player.  I started playing slow and I got faster and she whipped me.  Then I heard another piano then a big man pulled up the curtains and there was George playing the piano the back stage.  Then a big man pulled up the curtains and there was George, my brother, playing the piano back stage.  The big man stopped Lob when she tried to get us then she stomped off.

I went to play with George.  I gave half my money to the the big man and my brother.

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